Thursday, December 13, 2007

What matters final presentation

17 comments:

berekm said...

Josh, Good job, In the begining it was a little slow but then it picked up fast and it was great. Good personal connections.

seanb said...

Josh, you were really fidgety during your presentation. You had a good powerpoint and looked at the audience alot. good job

samh said...

Josh, you had a pretty good presentation. You need to look up more and not read from your notecards. I liked you animations on your slides. Good work with the visual. Good Job.

DennisRocks said...

Josh! great job! you had some really good connections, but your slide show was with a little too much text. You spoke clearly though, so overall great job!

Anna K said...

Josh, you had interesting slides and spoke as a steady pace. You relied on your notes a little too much, but other then that, great job!

joeyw said...

Josh you had really good slides and really good personal connections too.

Jackie N said...

Josh, good job on your presentation. You relied on your notes a little too much, but you spoke at a good pace. Also I think you could've put a little less on your slides because I was a little distracted. Great job!

mmg said...

Josh, you did a good job on your presentation. You seemed to look at your note cards to much, but you did a great job on relating the books and projects to yourself.

seand said...

Josh, good presentation. Your powerpoint was good and you spoke clearly and loudly. You read from your notes a little much but I think everyone does. Good job!

annies said...

Joshy! Great job on your presentation! You need more eye contact though. It looked like you worked hard on your slides. I like the dragon at the end :] Awesome job!

Averee said...

Josh,
Great job on your presentation. You kept looking up at the screen, and you were a little too quiet. Also, your power point slides were a little too wordy, but you made up for it with good personal and world connections. Try not to rely on your note cards so much, but other than that, good job!

ethan l said...

You seemed a little unprepared because you looked at your notes a lot and you were moving around a lot.

angelicao said...

You needed to look at the audience a little more and sometimes i didnt really understand how things connected to you. but other than that good job

Xavia H2011 said...

Josh,
Goodjob connecting everything to yourself and to the world. My only advice, don't read off the screen and your notes, other than that, you did a pretty good job.

kellyS said...

Josh, try not to read straight from your notes or the power point. Your power point was well put together so just try and go into more detail in your actual speaking part. Good Job!
p.s. I liked the dinosaur or whatever that was at the end!

adama said...

Josh, you had a very creative powerpoint. Also you spoke very clearly and made good eye contact. But your presentation seemed a little short.Other than that good job.

alenav said...

Josh, you had a good presentation. Good eye contact and relations. Good job!